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I believe in forgiveness. Forgiveness is typically defined as the process of concluding resentment, indignation or anger as a result of a perceived offence, difference or mistake, and ceasing to demancd punishment.
There are a lot of benefits with forgiveness. Forgiveness makes you happy and it makes the other person happy. Forgiveness also means letting go and moving on from what happened. It is not healthy to dwell on something for a long time. I belive that whats done is done and the only way to move on completely is to forgive.
I have done a lot of forgiving in my life. When somebody hurts me I am usually able to forgive fairly quickley. Although I may be able to forgive it certainly does not mean I am able to forget. I'd rather not stay upset over something and waste time being angry with someone when all I need to do is forgive and move on.
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The only comments I have are basically the ones from class.
ReplyDelete1. I think your thesis needs to be added to the first paragraph.
2. When I read it, it seemed like the sentences run, I would put the commas at certain parts to add voice.
3. Last I would just avoid the repetitive language.